The First Move

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glad I read that. it's tight

glad I read that. it's tight and comic and paints a scene that feels painfully true.

Anonymous more than 6 years ago

haha. totally love it. very

haha. totally love it. very clever.

Anonymous more than 6 years ago

It may seem odd to say it,

It may seem odd to say it, given the subject matter, but this poem is fresh; it turns the romantic sonnet on its head in a spare yet compelling way. The first three lines in particular, and the imagery they conjured, tension they created (no autobiographical moments of course), stayed with me in a way that other poems on this list did not. My vote.

Anonymous more than 6 years ago