Smithereens

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This is fantastic! You start

This is fantastic! You start it off with a promise of Jazz and the whole structure bops with heat like it's Hard Bop and cools suddenly at various turns - what a fantastic rhythm!

This is a poem you could nestle into, make your home and find new things around every corner.

Ryan more than 5 years ago

Excellent.
I love the line

Excellent.
I love the line "when your kindness comes exposed"

Gaylene more than 5 years ago

i love the rhythm. i had to

i love the rhythm. i had to read this out loud because it's so beautiful. has my vote.

Anonymous more than 5 years ago

Like how it all whips

Like how it all whips forward, each turn unexpected but the heartstrings tied back to the sweater.

I walk, I turn down an empty block to
(verb)(subject)(object) of my affection.

great sounds and fresh.

Anonymous more than 5 years ago

I like this a lot. It works

I like this a lot. It works well and flows nicely.

Anonymous more than 5 years ago


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