The Death of Thomas Jerusalem Wall

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Would they have paused and

Would they have paused and considered if Jesus was still in the business of healing if the hounds of hell weren't pressuring them with distractions?

Terry more than 6 years ago

I love how imaginative and

I love how imaginative and fun this is - oh to be a cowboy again!

country girl more than 6 years ago

I love it! This story takes

I love it! This story takes me way back to those back alley, marbles-in-the-ditch days with my brother and Jimmy and all Jimmy's brothers and I was so happy to be "Maria".

Veronika more than 6 years ago

I am extremely proud to call

I am extremely proud to call the author my cousin. Good job Matt its wonderful!

Eva-Marie more than 6 years ago

What a wonderful story! I

What a wonderful story! I love the back and forth between kids and cowboys... awesome!

flower girl more than 6 years ago

Great story, EXCEPT:
"are on

Great story, EXCEPT:
"are on are heals"? Are you kidding me? Not one, but TWO homophones in this sentence, which should read "are on our heels"!

Steve Fahnestalk more than 6 years ago

Wow, Didn't see that one

Wow, Didn't see that one coming. Good Job!

Chuck Norris more than 6 years ago

amazing imagination. Very

amazing imagination. Very different. Loved it

Cathy more than 6 years ago

I have worked in an

I have worked in an elementary school, including yard duty at recess, and the way children juxtapose real half-comprehended issues and imaginative play here rings true. This could be expanded into the beginning or epilogue of a novel length story which follows these boys into adulthood. Definitely in my top 3 of all the entries.

Laurie more than 6 years ago

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