The Natural Elements

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Nicely done. But in common

Nicely done. But in common with much fiction these days it cries out for resolution. As a reader I want to hear what happens with Cal, Lana, Terry, Angie and Rain.
Cal is such a well-meaning schlub that you can surely tell he's going to come a cropper in the near future. He lacks assertiveness; is that commonplace with modern men? I don't think so, but it could be.
Darn it, she has to turn this short into a book.

Steve Fahnestalk more than 6 years ago

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