For Uncle Dong Fei Who Just Keeps Going

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I'm sorry for the double dip

I'm sorry for the double dip – My rhymed haiku which looked a pip – Was converted to a run-on line – By Otto Edit (the fascist swine) – And so I undertook to replace it – Using dashes to properly pace it – Unfortunately, one can't erase it – And now, my solo idiocy – Has expanded to a trilogy.

ANTHONY BECK more than 6 years ago

Uncle Dong Fei's quite okay

Uncle Dong Fei's quite okay --
home alone or on the visitor's day --
oong-goo and mook-ngee his way

ANTHONY BECK more than 6 years ago

Uncle Dong Fei's quite

Uncle Dong Fei's quite okay
home alone or on the visitor's day
oong-goo and mook-ngee his way

ANTHONY BECK more than 6 years ago

Weyman, thank you for

Weyman, thank you for introducing me to Dong Fei the character. You have proven that detail in description can advance a perspective that is both simple and meaningful. If only movie stars and glamour magazines could shed such meaning on life.

Byron more than 6 years ago


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