Postcard Story

Dogs Fall in Love at First Sight, You Know

Brooke Lockyer

Shadow lay dead in the kitchen, curled inside Ghost. Veronica’s par­ents spilled cof­fee on their slip­pers, mur­mured Jesus Christ. They pulled the dead cat from the ter­rier and buried her in the back­yard. Wrapped in a brown and white blan­ket, Veronica watched from her bed­room win­dow, her hair turn­ing pink at the sight. 

Later, while Veronica was draw­ing por­traits of Shadow and splat­ter­ing the paper with tears, Ghost dug up the dead cat and car­ried her gen­tly in his mouth to the door, scratch­ing with one paw to come in. Shadow’s head and legs poked out stiffly from Ghost’s jaws, and when Veronica opened the door she backed away scream­ing. She ran and hid in the closet when the dog came inside, squeez­ing her hands over her ears to shut out the sound of Ghost’s pant­ing and Shadow’s rigor-mortis limbs tap-tapping on the closet door.

Veronica’s dad tried to retrieve Shadow from the devoted clamp of Ghost’s jaws by dan­gling toys but Ghost would not let go. That night, Veronica’s par­ents crept down to the kitchen while Ghost slept and care­fully pried Shadow from the dog’s paws. Veronica’s mom held the flash­light while her hus­band shov­elled, deeper this time. 

The next day Ghost dug up Shadow again. 

Veronica’s dad placed boul­ders on top of Shadow’s grave but Ghost dug around them to get to Shadow. Veronica’s dad hid Shadow in a new grave behind a shrub, but Ghost sniffed out the dead cat and lifted her from the earth again, drool­ing a lit­tle, triumphantly. 

Veronica hid behind a tree, peer­ing around the bark to watch Ghost play with Shadow on the porch as he bat­ted at her gen­tly with his paws, or propped her against the wall with his nose, lick­ing what was left of her face. 

Veronica felt guilty for being afraid of Shadow, espe­cially next to the devo­tion of Ghost. After all, it wasn’t Shadow’s fault that she was dead, that her fur was mat­ted and miss­ing in some places, that her moon bones were show­ing through. “Sorry, Shadow,” she whis­pered into the bark as she pinched her nose against the smell. 

Veronica’s par­ents wanted to keep Shadow in their back­yard so Veronica could offer pop­pies and prayers. But Ghost wouldn’t stop dig­ging up the cat. Neighbours began treat­ing the fam­ily coolly, per­turbed by Shadow’s reap­pear­ing and rapidly dete­ri­o­rat­ing corpse and the lit­tle open graves dot­ting the yard. They were weary of Ghost too, some mis­un­der­stand­ing his loy­alty, sus­pect­ing he’d dug up Shadow to fin­ish off what was left of her remains. 

Two weeks after Shadow’s first res­ur­rec­tion, Veronica’s dad laid the dead cat in the car. Ghost pressed his nose against the glass as Veronica slipped into the back seat. In the heart of the woods, they buried Shadow’s fur-tufted skele­ton deep in the soil, amongst indif­fer­ent trees. The lit­tle cat was still sticky with Ghost’s saliva when Veronica placed her, for the last time, in the grave.

 

12 Comments

an endearing read through and through; if only we could be as devoted and caring to friends in life and death as Ghost was to Shadow. The words conjure the same childlike innocence portrayed in the postcard; bold, carefree strokes, telling the story as a young girl sees fit; full of wonder, fear and colour. On the surface Brooke Lockyer’s piece compares the reaction of animal intentions and well-meaning parental protocol. Where as out of love, Ghost resurrects the mangled body of his friend, Veronica’s parents insist of keeping Shadow in the ground, doing everything they can to avoid being “treat[ed] coolly” by the neighborhood. Veronica is somewhere in between, ashamed of her disgust, but ultimately submit to her parent’s ways. Ghost represents Veronica’s urge to be individual, persistent in their devotion to a friend, not caring what outsiders may think about the strange “grave dotted” yard, putting the devotion to friends and loves first. Her parents, evolved humans, supposedly taught right from wrong represent Veronica’s growing skepticism and loss of innocence. Last of all I believe Shadow represents Veronica’s free spirit, the muse of individuality, creative mojo. In the end, even though Veronica has thoughts of her own about shadow, she keeps them to herself and listens to what she’s been told. This piece uses imagination, dark humor and language to portray a realistic snapshoot of a young girl in the fight for her innocence, ultimately loosing, without knowing what she was fighting for. Because Lockyer does not focus on veronica, it is a fresh, interesting way of reading about this subject, without being too obvious or obnoxious to the reader.
I love this.
if I hadn't seen the postcard the imagery in the writing would have conjured up the same picture. Enjoyed the viewpoint from the little girl's perspective.
This is my favourite. It should win First Prize.
Sniffle. Loved this.
i will strive to be as reliable and devoted to my friends in life and death as Ghost to Shadow.
Imaginative, somewhat darkly funny, and mesmerizing.
Wonderfully different.
this touched my heart
For me, this piece reveals the pure and direct intentions of the animal, the well-meaning protocol of the parent, and the tension for the child between the two ways of being.

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