Shadows Wait for Dawn to Call

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I thought your description of

I thought your description of a jackpine sonnet asked for rhyme of some sort, and so far this is the only one I have read that fits the bill. It is heads and shoulders above the previous examples. It even had coherent meaning.

Anonymous more than 12 years ago

This is far too regular to be

This is far too regular to be a jackpine sonnet, however. And rather conventional in its images, abstractions and predictable rhymes.

ZW more than 12 years ago

Wow- I would not sent mine in

Wow- I would not sent mine in had I read this first. It is lovely- well crafted - I just wasted $10

Anonymous more than 13 years ago

Rhyming--yes!

Rhyming sounds good today.

pattyo more than 13 years ago

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