For Uncle Dong Fei Who Just Keeps Going

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I'm sorry for the double dip

I'm sorry for the double dip – My rhymed haiku which looked a pip – Was converted to a run-on line – By Otto Edit (the fascist swine) – And so I undertook to replace it – Using dashes to properly pace it – Unfortunately, one can't erase it – And now, my solo idiocy – Has expanded to a trilogy.

ANTHONY BECK more than 10 years ago

Uncle Dong Fei's quite okay

Uncle Dong Fei's quite okay --
home alone or on the visitor's day --
oong-goo and mook-ngee his way

ANTHONY BECK more than 10 years ago

Uncle Dong Fei's quite

Uncle Dong Fei's quite okay
home alone or on the visitor's day
oong-goo and mook-ngee his way

ANTHONY BECK more than 10 years ago

Weyman, thank you for

Weyman, thank you for introducing me to Dong Fei the character. You have proven that detail in description can advance a perspective that is both simple and meaningful. If only movie stars and glamour magazines could shed such meaning on life.

Byron more than 10 years ago